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My first favorite video game is League of Legends.
My second favorite video game is the rolling sky.
My third favorite video game is brawl stars.
Lastly, My favorite video game is digdig.io

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Hi, Joey! You like a lot of video games! I wonder why you like them.  

NOTE: Please remember to always capitalize the first letter of proper nouns.

- Teacher Debbie


My first favorite video game is League of Legends.
>> This is a good sentence!


My second favorite video game is the rolling sky.
>> 
My second favorite video game is Rolling Sky.

My third favorite video game is brawl stars.
>> My third favorite video game is Brawl Stars.

Lastly, My favorite video game is digdig.io
>> Lastly, I like Digdig.io.
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