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Q:How can you tell when people are being dishonest with you?
A:I can know that people are being dishonest by their parlance.
Most people, have a little vibration when they are dishonest with me.
Also, they usually avoid my eyes when they are being dishonest with me, so it's usually easy to know someone is being dishonest with me.

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Hello Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great¡¦ ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I can know that people are being dishonest by their parlance.

>> CORRECT!
Most people, have a little vibration when they are dishonest with me.

>> Most people, make a little vibration in their body when they are dishonest with me.
Also, they usually avoid my eyes when they are being dishonest with me, so it's usually easy to know someone is being dishonest with me.

>> Also, they usually avoid looking into my eyes when they are being dishonest with me, so it's usually easy to know when someone is being dishonest with me.

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