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What successful goal did you have last year? Answer in a few sentences.

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I achieved the goal of entering the college last year, and it is successful for me.

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Hi, Judy! It sure is!

This is a big accomplishment, in fact. You are lucky, but most importantly, you worked really hard to achieve this goal.

Now, you can make bigger ones. Thanks for this answer. Your sentence is perfect, excellent job!

See you!

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