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So, if you truly meditate on praying for being unrestricted, you will become without restraints or obstacles(become unrestricted?).

You have already become unrestricted, marvelous

Since you already have no worries, no sorrows, no hesitation, no hatred in your there is no doubt that there is nothing to cause people to mad, of course, and you will contribute to peace by becoming a heavenly child and a heavenly child under the protection of the Holy Creator.

How happy is this!

Confirming the fact that we have attained this realization, we are all here
in praise of your enlightenment, We read alout dharma of amrita and the words of angels

Please light it up.

Then, from now on, I will recite dharma of amrita and the words of angels.

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Here are the other corrections! ^^

- T. Rina


1. So, if you truly meditate on praying for being unrestricted, you will become without restraints or obstacles(become unrestricted?).
>> So, if you truly meditate on praying for being unrestricted, you will have no restraints or obstacles.

2. You have already become unrestricted, marvelous
>> CORRECT!

3. Since you already have no worries, no sorrows, no hesitation, no hatred in your there is no doubt that there is nothing to cause people to mad, of course, and you will contribute to peace by becoming a heavenly child and a heavenly child under the protection of the Holy Creator.
>> Since you already have no worries, no sorrows, no hesitation, no hatred and there is no doubt that there is nothing to cause people to be mad, of course, and you will contribute to peace by becoming a heavenly child and a heavenly child under the protection of the Holy Creator.

4. How happy is this!
>> How happy this is!

5. Confirming the fact that we have attained this realization, we are all here in praise of your enlightenment. 
>> CORRECT!

6.  
We read alout dharma of amrita and the words of angels. 
>> We read aloud dharma of amrita and the words of angels. 

7.  
Please light it up.
>> CORRECT!

8. Then, from now on, I will recite dharma of amrita and the words of angels.
>> CORRECT!
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