¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

I thought it was the whole thing, but the back part is missing. I upload the rest .~^

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ½Å*±³
2022-04-07 557

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

So, if you truly meditate on praying for being unrestricted, you will become without restraints or obstacles(become unrestricted?).

You have already become unrestricted, marvelous

Since you already have no worries, no sorrows, no hesitation, no hatred in your there is no doubt that there is nothing to cause people to mad, of course, and you will contribute to peace by becoming a heavenly child and a heavenly child under the protection of the Holy Creator.

How happy is this!

Confirming the fact that we have attained this realization, we are all here
in praise of your enlightenment, We read alout dharma of amrita and the words of angels

Please light it up.

Then, from now on, I will recite dharma of amrita and the words of angels.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good evening, Tae Kyo~
Here are the other corrections! ^^

- T. Rina


1. So, if you truly meditate on praying for being unrestricted, you will become without restraints or obstacles(become unrestricted?).
>> So, if you truly meditate on praying for being unrestricted, you will have no restraints or obstacles.

2. You have already become unrestricted, marvelous
>> CORRECT!

3. Since you already have no worries, no sorrows, no hesitation, no hatred in your there is no doubt that there is nothing to cause people to mad, of course, and you will contribute to peace by becoming a heavenly child and a heavenly child under the protection of the Holy Creator.
>> Since you already have no worries, no sorrows, no hesitation, no hatred and there is no doubt that there is nothing to cause people to be mad, of course, and you will contribute to peace by becoming a heavenly child and a heavenly child under the protection of the Holy Creator.

4. How happy is this!
>> How happy this is!

5. Confirming the fact that we have attained this realization, we are all here in praise of your enlightenment. 
>> CORRECT!

6.  
We read alout dharma of amrita and the words of angels. 
>> We read aloud dharma of amrita and the words of angels. 

7.  
Please light it up.
>> CORRECT!

8. Then, from now on, I will recite dharma of amrita and the words of angels.
>> CORRECT!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
117479 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 1
117478 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 0
117477 HOMEWORK ¹è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 737
117476 How do you overcome stress at work? ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 841
117475 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 1
117474 Good evening! °­*ÀÌ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 663
117473 I would appreciate it if you could check the sentence below. ½Å*±³ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 1022
117472 About the development of technology. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 699
117471 Discipline method ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 2
117470 Can you give three examples of synonyms? / What are synonyms for? ÁÖ*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 996
117469 Do you spend more free time with family or friends? What do you... ÅÂ*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 630
117468 Do you think people would be less human if they had the organ of... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 1035
117467 Homework ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 755
117466 Homework ¹æ*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 876
117465 What are your weaknesses? Explain in detail. ·ù*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 843
117464 Thursday homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 967
117463 Wednesday Homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 1227
117462 Homework ÇÏ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 2
117461 Homework ±â*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 867
117460 ESSAY: Parents should be held responsible for their children\'s... Àü*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-03-17 827

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04