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I don't think it's necessary for children to have a pet, but it would be nice. Because you can share emotional exchanges and become friends or family. Because people are social animals, they think that they have pets so they don't feel lonely.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)

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I don't think it's necessary for children to have a pet, but it would be nice. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because you can share emotional exchanges and become friends or family. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because people are social animals, they think that they have pets so they don't feel lonely.
>>> People are social animals, they think that if they have pets won't feel lonely.
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