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HOMEWORK:
Have you ever done a crime before? Answer in a few sentences.

No, I have never done that before. It is serious to commit a crime so I can't even Imagine. The biggest sin that I have committed is lying and being late.

Thank you Donna for great teaching as well as supporting me.

Have a wonderful evening!

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Hello there, Hae Ju! Good evening!

I am sure that you have never done one. You are so proper and pure so I could hardly imagine as well how you can commit one.

I have J-walked for so many times at night before. There are no police to arrest me and very few people on the streets. This is a crime in the Philippines.

Anyway, let us never commit one in our lives and live peacefully. Great job on writing this homework! The message is very clear and the sentences are all correct!

I will always be here to teach you well and give you all the support that you need. Thanks for being the best student!

-T. Donna =)

No, I have never done that before. 
>> Correct!

It is serious to commit a crime so I can't even Imagine. 
>> Correct!
Or: imagine

The biggest sin that I have committed is lying and being late.
>> Correct!

Thank you Donna for great teaching as well as supporting me.
>> Correct! You're always welcome and it's always a great pleasure!

Have a wonderful evening!
>> Correct!

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