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Writing Task(Apr 19th, 2022)

작성자: 남*승
2022-04-20 356

회원님의 영작문

Can you talk about three things you like about yourself?
The first is persistency. If there's something I do want to do, I keep doing it until I finally get it done. I got the IQ test three times when I was young. And the result was awesome, not because it was high but it was the same. I mean I got the score 100, 101 and 101. My friends call me a dog since there was a animated film, the title of which was 101 Dalmacian. The main character was a dog. Anyway, that is not my point, so let's not get into that. At an early age in my life, I knew that I'm not smart at all and the only thing I can success is to do until I get what I want. Since I realized that, I try to do with persistency.
The second is my outgoing character. I do love to meet people, talk with them and invite them to my house. I think everyone likes me. My self-esteem is higher than any normal person on average.
The last one is I get into sleep in just a few second after I close my eyes.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, U Seung!

Oh, thank you so much for making time to give a feedback. I know that you are very tired already. Just have a good rest for tonight!

T. Roanne ^_^
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The first is persistency. 
>> Correct! 
If there's something I do want to do, I keep doing it until I finally get it done. 
>> Correct! 
I got the IQ test three times when I was young. 
>> Correct! 
And the result was awesome, not because it was high but it was the same. 
>> And the result was awesome, not because it was high, but it was the same. 
I mean I got the score 100, 101 and 101. 
>> Correct! 
My friends call me a dog since there was a animated film, the title of which was 101 Dalmacian. 
>> My friends call me a dog since there was an animated film, the title of which was 101 Dalmatians. 
The main character was a dog. 
>> Correct! 
Anyway, that is not my point, so let's not get into that. 
>> Correct! 
At an early age in my life, I knew that I'm not smart at all and the only thing I can success is to do until I get what I want. 
>> At an early age in my life, I knew that I'm not smart at all and the only thing I can succeed is to do until I get what I want. 
Since I realized that, I try to do with persistency.
>> Correct! 
The second is my outgoing character. 
>> Correct! 
I do love to meet people, talk with them and invite them to my house. 
>> Correct! 
I think everyone likes me. 
>> Correct! 
My self-esteem is higher than any normal person on average.
>> Correct! 
The last one is I get into sleep in just a few second after I close my eyes.
>> Correct! 
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