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When I have an urgent matter to talk to my boss who is talking on the phone, I would like to solve the problem with three different ways. First, I am going to keep waiting him until he finishes his call. This is because it is hard to judge what is much more urgent between his call and my urgent matter. Another way is to leave a memo on his desk while he is answering the phone. Even though he is talking with someone else, he can see the memo. It is a wise way not disturbing the conversation but conveying my message. The other is finding another person who can handle the urgent matter. In the company, a work is done by getting tangled up like a spider web with lots of people. Thus, it is sure that the boss is not only the person who can solve the problem. With these three ways, I am certain that the urgent matter will be solved well.

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Hello Sophia. I truly appreciate your honesty in giving your ideas on how would you handle this kind of situation. Continue to strive hard. ~T. Lyn
When I have an urgent matter to talk to my boss who is talking on the phone, I would like to solve the problem with three different ways.
>>If I have an urgent matter and need to talk to my boss who is talking on the phone, I have three ways to solve the problem.
First, I am going to keep waiting him until he finishes his call.
>>First, I will keep waiting for him to finish the call.
This is because it is hard to judge what is much more urgent between his call and my urgent matter.
>>This is because it is difficult to judge which is far more urgent, his call or mine.
Another way is to leave a memo on his desk while he is answering the phone.
>>Another way is to leave a memo on his desk while he is talking on the phone.
Even though he is talking with someone else, he can see the memo. 
>>Correct. He can see the notes even if he is talking to someone else.
It is a wise way not disturbing the conversation but conveying my message.
>>It's a smart way to get my message across without interrupting the conversation.
The other is finding another person who can handle the urgent matter.
>>Lastly, I need to find someone else who can handle urgent matters.
In the company, a work is done by getting tangled up like a spider web with lots of people.
>>In a company, work is done with the help of others like a spider's web.
Thus, it is sure that the boss is not only the person who can solve the problem.
>>I am sure that the boss isn't the only one who can solve the problem.
With these three ways, I am certain that the urgent matter will be solved well.
>>Correct. I am certain that these three methods will solve the urgent matter well.
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