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It's ABIR-Tango.I love this song.It's a song that I really like.So I want to introduce it to my parents.

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Hi Do Hyeon! 

I think that is a good choice. I would also pick that. Hahaha!

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

It's ABIR-Tango.
>> I would like to dedicate the song "ABIR-Tango" to them. 

I love this song.
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It's a song that I really like.So I want to introduce it to my parents.
>> It's a song that I really like so I want to introduce it to my parents.

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