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영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

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작성자: 박*민
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회원님의 영작문

•the least/the most attractive personality traits in a person?
I am attracted to people who develop themselves. It is people who are diligent, and responsible for their work. and someone I can learn from. // I don't feel attracted to people with lazy personality.
•compare you and your best friend’s?
My friend concentrates very well and does everything she planned than me. // I can compare clothes style with my friend. she prefers casual styles, but I like feminine clothes.
•Where is the best / worst place to live?
The best place to live is Denmark, i think. I heard that the security is good and the happiness index is high. and I heard that Danish education is good, too. /Africa? I've never been there, but I thought it would be hard to live when I saw the video about Africa. Traffic was chaotic, and security was bad.
•How would you compare today’s weather with yesterday?
It’s cloudy and little rainy today than yesterday. Yesterday’s weather is sunny and warm, but today is not…

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kate!
I hope you can get comfortable with the expressions here.
We have a lot to practice later.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
the least/the most attractive personality traits in a person?
>> What are the least or the most attractive personality traits in a person?
I am attracted to people who develop themselves.
>> Correct
It is people who are diligent, and responsible for their work. and someone I can learn from.
>> They are people who are diligent and responsible in their work and also people I can learn from.
I don't feel attracted to people with lazy personality.
>> I don't feel attracted to lazy people.
compare you and your best friend’s?
>> Can you compare you and your best friend’s personalities?
My friend concentrates very well and does everything she planned than me.
>> My friend concentrates very well and she sticks to her plans while I don't.
I can compare clothes style with my friend. 
>> I can compare our personal styles as well.
she prefers casual styles, but I like feminine clothes.
>> She has a more casual style while I prefer wearing feminine clothes.
Where is the best / worst place to live?
>> Correct
The best place to live is Denmark, i think. 
>> The best place to live is Denmark, I think. 
I heard that the security is good and the happiness index is high. 
>> I heard that it's very safe there and people are just generally happier compared to other places.
and I heard that Danish education is good, too. 
>> I heard that Danish education is good too. 
I've never been there, but I thought it would be hard to live when I saw the video about Africa. 
>> I've never been there, but I thought it would be hard to live there when I saw a video about Africa. 
Traffic was chaotic, and security was bad.
>> Correct
How would you compare today’s weather with yesterday?
>> Correct
It’s cloudy and little rainy today than yesterday. 
>> It’s cloudy and a little rainy today.
Yesterday’s weather is sunny and warm, but today is not…
>> However, yesterday’s weather was sunny and warm.
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