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영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

part1-2

작성자: 박*민
2022-04-22 355

회원님의 영작문

• Tell me about your hometown?
My hometown is Gyerong, there are peaceful and relaxing. It is know as a military headquarters, my dad is working there. And Gyeryong mountain is a big feature, too.
• How would you compare your hometown to Jochiwon?
Gyeryong is better than Jochiwon. Gyeryong continues to develop, and it will have a lot more places to play. And my all friends are in there.
• What are you like?
I’m bright and … I’m a morning person, and I’m the type to make plans.
• What is your idea of an enjoyable weekend?
I think an enjoyable weekend is to play outside, not at home. Of course, I like to lie on bed, but I get more excited when I play outside. I like talking with friends at café, and eating in restaurants.
• What qualities do you admire in your parents?
My father is so sweet, it is help moods harmonious, and My mother is wise and always gives me the right advice. I learn many things to learn from them.
omg it's too full to write..

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kate!
Practice this on your own first.
I'll give you a sample on how to say it in class.
I'll see you later!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Tell me about your hometown?
>> Tell me about your hometown.
My hometown is Gyerong.
>> Correct
there are peaceful and relaxing. 
>> It is peaceful and relaxing there.
It is know as a military headquarters, my dad is working there. 
>> It is known for its military headquarters and, actually, my dad is working there.
And Gyeryong mountain is a big feature, too.
>> Gyeryong mountain is a big attraction, too.
How would you compare your hometown to Jochiwon?
>> Correct
Gyeryong is better than Jochiwon. 
>> Correct
Gyeryong continues to develop, and it will have a lot more places to play. 
>> Gyeryong continues to develop, and soon, it will have a lot more places for recreation.
And my all friends are in there.
>> All my friends are there, too. 
What are you like?
>> Correct
I’m bright and … I’m a morning person, and I’m the type to make plans.
>> I’m bright and I’m a morning person, and I’m also the type who likes making plans.
What is your idea of an enjoyable weekend?
>> Correct
I think an enjoyable weekend is to play outside, not at home. 
>> I think an enjoyable weekend is to get out of the house and have fun in different places.
Of course, I like to lie on bed, but I get more excited when I play outside. 
>> Of course, I like lying on the bed but I get more excited when I go out.
I like talking with friends at cafe and eating in restaurants.
>> I like talking with friends at cafes and eating in restaurants.
What qualities do you admire in your parents?
>> Correct
My father is so sweet, it is help moods harmonious.
>> My father is so sweet and he keeps the atmosphere light and comfortable.
My mother is wise and always gives me the right advice. 
>> My mother is wise and she always gives me the right advice in every situation.
I learn many things to learn from them.
>> I learn many things from them.
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