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영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

part 2

작성자: 박*민
2022-04-22 297

회원님의 영작문

When I was 21 years old, I had a presentation assignment in my school major class. Of course, that is group project. The groups were randomly divided into groups of people I've never seen before because it’s covid-19. There are 3 members including me. We had to make a presentation for the purpose of preview the contents of the class, so we had to make it easy and specific. We divided the work into 3 main categories first. There were coding, having a presentation, and making a slide deck. I take on making the slide deck. I was worried that someone ignored the call or do it roughly, but it was not. We kept exchanging feedback with each other. The communication was very well. I was nervous when I finished making the slide deck and sent it to the members, but I remember the moment when they liked it, saying, "Wow, it's really well made." I was so relieved and happy. Because it was really hard to make it. I said I would make it because I was confident, but I regretted it while making it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kate!
You put a lot of effort into this.
I was impressed.
Let's talk about it more in class.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I was 21 years old, I had a presentation assignment in my school major class.
>> When I was 21 years old, I had to prepare a presentation for class.
Of course, that is group project. 
>> Of course, that was a group project. 
The groups were randomly divided into groups of people I've never seen before because it’s covid-19. 
>> The groups were randomly divided into groups of people I've never seen before because of the pandemic.
There are 3 members including me. 
>> There were 3 members in the group including me. 
We had to make a presentation for the purpose of preview the contents of the class, so we had to make it easy and specific. 
>> We had to make a presentation for the purpose of giving a preview of the class curriculum, so we had to make it easy and specific. 
We divided the work into 3 main categories first. 
>> Correct
There were coding, having a presentation, and making a slide deck. 
>> They were coding, creating the presentation, and making a slide deck. 
I take on making the slide deck. 
>> I took on the task of making the slide deck. 
I was worried that someone ignored the call or do it roughly, but it was not. 
>> I was worried that someone might ignore calls or do her task carelessly but those things didn't happen.
We kept exchanging feedback with each other. 
>> Correct
The communication was very well. 
>> The communication was very good.
I was nervous when I finished making the slide deck and sent it to the members, but I remember the moment when they liked it, saying, "Wow, it's really well made." 
>> Correct
I was so relieved and happy. 
>> Correct
Because it was really hard to make it.
>> Correct
I said I would make it because I was confident, but I regretted it while making it.
>>  I said I would make it because I was confident, but I was regretting while making it.
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