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The Internet provides a wide range of learning because we can easily obtain the knowledge we want because we can get quick searches and results. So, I think that the amount of learning and speed that are several times higher than learning through books will increase the amount of knowledge as well as the intelligence of people, so that the intelligence can only be increased.

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Hi, Raina! What a good answer! Thank you for doing your homework!:)


The Internet provides a wide range of learning because we can easily obtain the knowledge we want because we can get quick searches and results.
>>Correct!
 So, I think that the amount of learning and speed that are several times higher than learning through books will increase the amount of knowledge as well as the intelligence of people, so that the intelligence can only be increased.
>>Correct!
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