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Q What is the most unacceptable behavior that a worker can do in their office?

In my opinion, responsibility is the most important quality that workers should have at work.
Therefore, If someone doesn't do their own job by herself/himself or always tries to do the least thing that they could do, that would be seriously unacceptable. As a part of the group, regardless of its size, every worker needs to do what they should and take responsibility for that. I really don't like the person that causes others a lot of trouble and bothers someone else.

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Hi, Elena! I couldn't agree more. It is about professionalism. Thank you for sharing your opinions!-Faith-
Q What is the most unacceptable behavior that a worker can do in their office?

>> CORRECT
In my opinion, responsibility is the most important quality that workers should have at work.
>> CORRECT
Therefore, If someone doesn't do their own job by herself/himself or always tries to do the least thing that they could do, that would be seriously unacceptable.
>> 
Therefore, if someone doesn't do their own job by herself/himself or always tries to do the least thing that they could do, that would be seriously unacceptable. 
As a part of the group, regardless of its size, every worker needs to do what they should and take responsibility for that.
>> CORRECT
OR 
As a part of the team, regardless of its size, every worker ought to do what they should and take responsibility for that. 
I really don't like the person that causes others a lot of trouble and bothers someone else.
>> CORRECT
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