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childhood image

작성자: 윤*영
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회원님의 영작문

What images come to your mind when you are asked about your childhood?

When I was child, I was very talkative, active and extroverted. I was a little rabbit which jumped up every time with happiness. Even though I was full of joy, it sometimes annoyed my friends. This is because I always wanted to talk with them even in the classroom. Sharing my interesting ideas with people was one of the funniest activities in my childhood. Of course, I understand that listening my ideas was not the everyday enjoyable activities to my friends. If I go back to the past, I would like to be a little bit quite focusing on my study not interrupting friends and a teacher.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Monday, Sophia. I'm glad knowing your childhood experiences. You are a fun person to be with. Don't let others change your personality~ T. Lyn
When I was child, I was very talkative, active and extroverted.
>>I was talkative, active, and outgoing when I was a child.
I was a little rabbit which jumped up every time with happiness.
>>I was like a little rabbit that jumped every time I was happy.
Even though I was full of joy, it sometimes annoyed my friends.
>>I was full of joy, but I sometimes annoyed my friends.
This is because I always wanted to talk with them even in the classroom.
>>It was because I always wanted to talk to them even in the classroom.
Sharing my interesting ideas with people was one of the funniest activities in my childhood.
>>Sharing my interesting ideas with people was one of the most fun activities of my childhood.
Of course, I understand that listening my ideas was not the everyday enjoyable activities to my friends.
>>Of course, I understand that listening to my thoughts was not a daily enjoyable activity for my friends.
If I go back to the past, I would like to be a little bit quite focusing on my study not interrupting friends and a teacher.
>>If I could go back in time, I would like to be a little quiet to focus on my studies without disturbing my friends and teachers.
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