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How do you usually spend your weekend?

작성자: 황*하
2022-04-26 647

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I try to spend my time with my family on the weekend. My wife and I work at the hospital as a radiological technician. My wife's duty usually changes every month from morning shift to night shift and she sometimes works on the weekend as well. Basically, I don't have a duty on the weekend, it really hard for my family to have a time together even if it's a holiday. My children really love swimming. However, it was almost impossible to go to swimming pool under the pandemic. Life guards ask customers to wear a mask to protect them from covid-19. I am not sure if they have tried to wear it. I couldn't breath wering a mask. Indoor facialities have a potential harzard from virus too. Although, there aren't many choices to do something on the weekend, I am trying to do find something to do with my family. We enjoy riding a bike these days so we go out to the park every weekend.

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Hello Mr. Hwang, I commend you for doing the effort in doing your composition. Spending time with family is a great way to relax. I really hope you have a wonderful day. Keep safe.~ T. Lyn
I try to spend my time with my family on the weekend.
>>Correct. On weekends, I like to spend time with my family.
My wife and I work at the hospital as a radiological technician.
>>My wife and I work as radiologists in a hospital.
My wife's duty usually changes every month from morning shift to night shift and she sometimes works on the weekend as well.
>>My wife usually changes her shift from morning shift to night shift every month and she also works on weekends.
Basically, I don't have a duty on the weekend, it really hard for my family to have a time together even if it's a holiday.
>>Basically, I don't work on the weekends, so it's really hard to spend time with my family even on holidays.
My children really love swimming.
>>Correct.
However, it was almost impossible to go to swimming pool under the pandemic.
>>However, going to the pool during the pandemic was almost impossible.
Life guards ask customers to wear a mask to protect them from covid-19.
>>Lifeguards inform the customers to wear their masks to protect against COVID-19.
I am not sure if they have tried to wear it.
>>I am not sure if have tried wearing their masks.
I couldn't breath wering a mask.
>>I couldn't breathe while wearing the mask.
Indoor facialities have a potential harzard from virus too.
>>Indoor facilities are also a potential risk of viruses.
Although, there aren't many choices to do something on the weekend, I am trying to do find something to do with my family.
>>There aren't many things I can do on the weekend, but I'm trying to find something to do with my family.
We enjoy riding a bike these days so we go out to the park every weekend.
>>These days, we like to ride bikes, so we go to the park every weekend.
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