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I remember most of the time when my sister was born. There is a big age difference (7 years difference), so they are very pretty and cute, so they get along very well. The most memorable thing is that my younger sibling goes to see a joke party at kindergarten and visits to congratulate me when I enter and graduate from school. Right now, my brother is going to the countryside to see if he is going to college, but when I graduate, I want to work abroad with him.

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I remember most of the time when my sister was born.
>>Correct!
 There is a big age difference (7 years difference), so they are very pretty and cute, so they get along very well.
>>We have a big age difference (7 years), so they are very pretty and cute, so they get along very well.
The most memorable thing is that my younger sibling goes to see a joke party at kindergarten and visits to congratulate me when I enter and graduate from school.
>>The most memorable thing was that my younger sibling went to see a joke party at kindergarten and visited to congratulate me when I entered and graduated from school.
 Right now, my brother is going to the countryside to see if he is going to college, but when I graduate, I want to work abroad with him.
>>Correct!

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