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Who always provides the things you need?

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I was provided the many things for my parents. For example, I was gotten clothes, food, a house, etc related money for my parents. And also, They will support me who should be going to go to the community college in the USA. However, they always didn't support all thing. So I had to earn money for personally expending. For instance, I earned money to go on a trip with my friends or buy electronic equipment that I want. Therefore, I was supported by my parents or earned money for my leisure life

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Hi there, Jay!
Thank you for sharing how much your parents care and love you. Some parents even if they can, would not do what your parents have done. You must be grateful for your parents :)
Enjoy the day!
T. Aki~
I was provided the many things for my parents. 
>>> I was provided  many things by my parents. 
For example, I was gotten clothes, food, a house, etc related money for my parents. 
>>> For example, I was gotten clothes, food, a house, etc related money by my parents. 
And also, They will support me who should be going to go to the community college in the USA. 
>>> And also, they will be support me when I  go to the community college in the USA. 
However, they always didn't support all thing. So I had to earn money for personally expending. 
>>> However, they always didn't support all thing. So I had to earn money for personal expending. 
For instance, I earned money to go on a trip with my friends or buy electronic equipment that I want. 
>>> CORRECT
Therefore, I was supported by my parents or earned money for my leisure life
>>> CORRECT
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