¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What is your dream house?

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±Ý*Áø
2022-05-02 558

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

If I live in Korea, I would want a new big apartment. However, I live in Canada now so I want a house. My dream house is a big two-stories house with a small garden and a garage in Canada. I really like gardening so I want to growing some vegetables and flowers in my garden. Moreover, I¡¯d like to have a barbecue with my family and friends by eating with vegetables that I grow up by myself in my garden on some sunshine day. I also want to drink a cup of coffee by looking at my garden in the morning. I will decorate my house modern with new fabulous furnitures. There are a living room and kitchen on the first floor and rooms on the second floor. I¡¯d like to decorate a room in the basement that my family can enjoy hobbies like watching movies, playing table tennis and working out. I¡¯m so happy just thinking about it.

1. Why did you miss the boat yesterday?
2. If you don't want to miss the boat tomorrow, you have to go to bed early tonight.
3. I shouldn't have missed the boat.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Chloe! 

Great choice of design. I think that would be a perfect place to live in. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon

If I live in Korea, I would want a new big apartment. 
>> If I live in South Korea, I would want a new and big apartment. 

However, I live in Canada now so I want a house. 
>> CORRECT

My dream house is a big two-stories house with a small garden and a garage in Canada. 
>> CORRECT

I really like gardening so I want to growing some vegetables and flowers in my garden. 
>> I really like gardening so I want to grow some vegetables and flowers in my garden. 

Moreover, I¡¯d like to have a barbecue with my family and friends by eating with vegetables that I grow up by myself in my garden on some sunshine day. 
>> Moreover, I¡¯d like to have a barbecue with my family and friends by eating vegetables that I grew up by myself in my garden on some sunshine day. 

I also want to drink a cup of coffee by looking at my garden in the morning. 
>> CORRECT

I will decorate my house modern with new fabulous furnitures. 
>> I will decorate my house modern with new and fabulous furniture. 

There are a living room and kitchen on the first floor and rooms on the second floor. 
>> The living room and kitchen should be on the first floor and the other rooms should be on the second floor. 

I¡¯d like to decorate a room in the basement that my family can enjoy hobbies like watching movies, playing table tennis and working out. 
>> I¡¯d like to decorate a room in the basement wherein my family can enjoy hobbies like watching movies, playing table tennis and working out. 

I¡¯m so happy just thinking about it.
>> CORRECT


1. Why did you miss the boat yesterday?
>> CORRECT

2. If you don't want to miss the boat tomorrow, you have to go to bed early tonight.
>> CORRECT

3. I shouldn't have missed the boat.
>> CORRECT

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
118270 Is setting a deadline important? why do you say so? ½Å*¼· ÁøÇàÁß 2022-04-15 461
118269 I don\\\'t want to be in a rush. ±è*ÁØ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-15 580
118268 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ÁøÇàÁß 2022-04-15 1
118267 According to the article, with the opening of the Seoul Arena,... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-15 466
118266 What is the best memory you have of your family doing something... ¹Ú*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-15 537
118265 4/14 HOMEWORK ( •̀ ¥ø •́ )y ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 588
118264 What I should do every day but don¡¯t. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 639
118263 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 2
118262 What is the best thing about your birthplace? ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 745
118261 What is your greatest childhood memory? Answer in a few... ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 553
118260 What is something you should do every day but don\'t? And why? ÅÂ*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 477
118259 HOMEWORK ¹è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 413
118258 Listen and Take Notes Discussion °­*¼ö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 552
118257 It is valued to spend time together. ±è*Å ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 0
118256 homework °¨*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 0
118255 homework °¨*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 1
118254 Thursday homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 467
118253 The best memories ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 516
118252 Homework ±â*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 551
118251 Talk about your best memory from a holiday. ¼º*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-14 460

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04