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If you can recommend a Korean dish to a foreigner, what would it be and why?

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If I can recommend different kinds of Korean dishes to a foreigner, then I want to recommend some spicy dishes.
In South Korea, there are a lot of dishes that are salty and spicy.
Because of these reasons, the foreigners may feel that the dishes is too hot and spicy, but they taste really good.
Also they all have their own special tastes, so I would recommend those dishes to the foreigners.

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Hi John! 

That would be great for people who have high tolerance on spicy food. 

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If I can recommend different kinds of Korean dishes to a foreigner, then I want to recommend some spicy dishes.
>>CORRECT

In South Korea, there are a lot of dishes that are salty and spicy.
>> CORRECT

Because of these reasons, the foreigners may feel that the dishes is too hot and spicy, but they taste really good.
>> Because of these reasons, the foreigners may like it because of the flavor and spices.

Also they all have their own special tastes, so I would recommend those dishes to the foreigners.
>> Also, they all have their own special tastes, so I would recommend those dishes to the foreigners.

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