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When I have visitors at home, I always do my best to make them feel at home. It's because whenever they feel comfortable at my place, I feel much better than they do, to be honest. Above all, I prepare some great food by cooking or ordering it and do exactly the same as I'd do on my birthday and parties or something. For example, I make some plans for them to have fun like games and events. A few months ago, I invited one of my friends to my place, and I prepared delicious food and enough drinks. We enjoyed a board game with some drinks and She really enjoyed it. I like it when they feel like lying down and make themselves at home in my place. I'm really looking forward to inviting my friends to my place and having fun together when I move to our new house sooner or later. yay!

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It must be special when your friends visit you, Elena! I can feel that you are a warm person. Good job! -Faith-
When I have visitors at home, I always do my best to make them feel at home. 
>> CORRECT
It's because whenever they feel comfortable at my place, I feel much better than they do, to be honest. 
>> CORRECT
Above all, I prepare some great food by cooking or ordering it and do exactly the same as I'd do on my birthday and parties or something. 
>> CORRECT
For example, I make some plans for them to have fun like games and events. 
>> CORRECT
A few months ago, I invited one of my friends to my place, and I prepared delicious food and enough drinks.
>> CORRECT
OR A few months ago, I asked my friend to come over to my place so I prepared delectable food and enough drinks. 
We enjoyed a board game with some drinks and She really enjoyed it.
>> We enjoyed a board game with some drinks and she really enjoyed it.
 I like it when they feel like lying down and make themselves at home in my place.
>> CORRECT
 I'm really looking forward to inviting my friends to my place and having fun together when I move to our new house sooner or later.
>> CORRECT
 yay!
>> Yay! 
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