¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

school uniform

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±Ç*Èñ
2022-05-06 647

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

It is difficult for me agree that both students and teachers wear school uniforms.

To wearing clothes shoule be based on individual perference and choices except in special cases.

Depending on the kinds of jobs, we need to wear uniform for safety, comfort, service and unity etc.

In my country, middle and high school students wear school uniforms not their choices but their duty.

Most of the school uniforms look uncomfortable and expensive in style and textiles.

Specially I don't like that divided into boys in pants and girls in skirts.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello Ms. Lily!
I understand your opinion. My country has accustomed citizens that students and teachers must be in uniform. I personally like wearing school uniform because I don't need to think of what to wear the following day. We only think that for Friday because it is our  "civilian" day, where all students and the teachers will not wear their uniforms. Also, school uniform shows your identity which school are you attending to. People in my city do not need to ask which school are you attending.
Have a great day :)
Aki~
It is difficult for me agree that both students and teachers wear school uniforms.
>>> It is difficult for me agree that both students and teachers wear school uniforms.
To wearing clothes shoule be based on individual perference and choices except in special cases.
>>> To wear clothes, it should be based on an individual's preference and choices except in special cases.
Depending on the kinds of jobs, we need to wear uniform for safety, comfort, service and unity etc.
>>> Depending on the kinds of jobs, we need to wear uniforms for safety, comfort, service, unity, etc.
In my country, middle and high school students wear school uniforms not their choices but their duty.
>>> CORRECT
Most of the school uniforms look uncomfortable and expensive in style and textiles.
>>> CORRECT
Specially I don't like that divided into boys in pants and girls in skirts.
>>> I especially don't like that uniforms are divided for boys into pants and girls in skirts.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
120214 Homework ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1
120213 The reason why there are generally few women in top positions. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 988
120212 homework ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1258
120211 Homework {06/27} Â÷*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 950
120210 last Sat in couples\' gathering Á¶*Çý ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1094
120209 Homework For 06.27.2022 ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 2
120208 Identify ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 3
120207 Monday homework ·ù*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 661
120206 Homework °­*¼± ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1676
120205 study of phrasal verb Á¶*Çý ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1007
120204 Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1
120203 Do you worry about your health when you eat salty, sugary, and... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1240
120202 The first case of monkeypox has been confirmed in Korea. What... ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 0
120201 Would you rather eat out or cook at home on special days? ¹Ú*¾Æ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1410
120200 greeting ¹Ú*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1302
120199 homework À±*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1132
120198 sad ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1183
120197 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1
120196 Q È«*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 2
120195 In your opinion, what are the possible problems that your... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-06-27 1141

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04