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It is difficult for me agree that both students and teachers wear school uniforms.

To wearing clothes shoule be based on individual perference and choices except in special cases.

Depending on the kinds of jobs, we need to wear uniform for safety, comfort, service and unity etc.

In my country, middle and high school students wear school uniforms not their choices but their duty.

Most of the school uniforms look uncomfortable and expensive in style and textiles.

Specially I don't like that divided into boys in pants and girls in skirts.

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Hello Ms. Lily!
I understand your opinion. My country has accustomed citizens that students and teachers must be in uniform. I personally like wearing school uniform because I don't need to think of what to wear the following day. We only think that for Friday because it is our  "civilian" day, where all students and the teachers will not wear their uniforms. Also, school uniform shows your identity which school are you attending to. People in my city do not need to ask which school are you attending.
Have a great day :)
Aki~
It is difficult for me agree that both students and teachers wear school uniforms.
>>> It is difficult for me agree that both students and teachers wear school uniforms.
To wearing clothes shoule be based on individual perference and choices except in special cases.
>>> To wear clothes, it should be based on an individual's preference and choices except in special cases.
Depending on the kinds of jobs, we need to wear uniform for safety, comfort, service and unity etc.
>>> Depending on the kinds of jobs, we need to wear uniforms for safety, comfort, service, unity, etc.
In my country, middle and high school students wear school uniforms not their choices but their duty.
>>> CORRECT
Most of the school uniforms look uncomfortable and expensive in style and textiles.
>>> CORRECT
Specially I don't like that divided into boys in pants and girls in skirts.
>>> I especially don't like that uniforms are divided for boys into pants and girls in skirts.
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