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The thing I love is robot vacuum cleaner that moves around the room.
After vacuuming, it starts mopping.
I have a cat, and when the cat walks around after taking a pee, the floor is full of sand footprints because a cat always pees on the sand.
So, robot cleaner is essential.

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Good day, Kevin!

This is a must have gadget! I want to have one. We have so many gadgets around nowadays. They make life more efficient and comfortable for us.

All of your sentences are correct, congratulations! Take note of the simple suggestion inserted in your last sentence.

See you in an hour. 

-T. Donna =)

The thing I love is robot vacuum cleaner that moves around the room.
>> Correct!

After vacuuming, it starts mopping.
>> Correct!

I have a cat, and when the cat walks around after taking a pee, the floor is full of sand footprints because a cat always pees on the sand.
>> Correct!

So, robot cleaner is essential.
>> Correct!
Or: So, the robot cleaner is essential.
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