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Describe the most interesting person you met on one of your travels.

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Describe the most interesting person you met on one of your travels.

I remember a woman in Hong Kong. When I go to my relatives's house, it was hard to find direction at MTR station. I was there with my mom and son. They looked at me to lead them. So I looked around several times. At that time, a woman came to me and asked where am I go. She told me the way to go and followed until I can find the house. What I was interesting is her talking. She didn't stop talking about Korean drama 'My love from the star'. She looked so happy to meet and help us whom is Korean. She talked about the drama, actor and actress until we reached the destination. Actually I didn't watch the drama yet. But I had to agree with her opinions about it, because I don't want to ruin her mood. It was interesting for me and I started to watch it when I came back home. It was really nice drama!!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good evening, Arissa! 

Thank you for making your homework.
You had an interesting encounter with a local which I think was really nice. 
I'm glad that you were able to meet a nice woman there who helped you out.
I also know the drama 'My Love from the star' and it's a very popular series here in my country. It's been years from its release but it's still well-known until this day. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina



I remember a woman in Hong Kong. When I go to my relatives's house, it was hard to find direction at MTR station. I was there with my mom and son. They looked at me to lead them. So I looked around several times. At that time, a woman came to me and asked where am I go. She told me the way to go and followed until I can find the house. What I was interesting is her talking. She didn't stop talking about Korean drama 'My love from the star'. She looked so happy to meet and help us whom is Korean. She talked about the drama, actor and actress until we reached the destination. Actually I didn't watch the drama yet. But I had to agree with her opinions about it, because I don't want to ruin her mood. It was interesting for me and I started to watch it when I came back home. It was really nice drama!!!

>> I remember a woman in Hong Kong. When I went to my relatives' house, it was hard to find directions at the MTR station. I was there with my mom and son. They looked at me to lead them. So I looked around several times. At that time, a woman came to me and asked where I need to go. She told me the way to go and followed until I can find the house. What was interesting was the way she talked. She didn't stop talking about the Korean drama 'My Love from the star'. She looked so happy to meet and help us who are Koreans. She talked about the drama, actors, and actresses until we reached the destination. Actually, I didn't watch the drama yet. But I had to agree with her opinions about it because I didn't want to ruin her mood. It was interesting for me and I started to watch it when I came back home. It was a really nice drama!!!
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