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No, I cannot live in another country for the rest of my life. because of the food. Because Korean food in Korea is cheap and tasty, but Korean food abroad is more expensive and will taste different.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)

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No, I cannot live in another country for the rest of my life. because of the food. 
>>> No, I cannot live in another country for the rest of my life because of the food. 

Because Korean food in Korea is cheap and tasty, but Korean food abroad is more expensive and will taste different.
>>> Korean food in Korea is cheap and tasty, but Korean food abroad is more expensive and will taste different.
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