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The last time I and my friends hung out is January, about 4 months ago. It's really funny time. We went to the downtown by bus and arrive as soon as we went to the cafe with good mood. We had a lot of talking about each other's story. We had a lot of story because it was meeting after a long time. Dinner time was very quickly came. We went to the restaurant, it's like hookup calash of mood. We ate pasta and chicken and soju, beer and makgeolii. It was very heavy for ours. We were very full but fun. We get more excited and we got a cotton candy from strangers. We doesn't know the reason of that. Finally, we went to the photo booth and took the pictures. Then, we goodbye.

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The last time I and my friends hung out is January, about 4 months ago. 
>> The last time my friends and I hung out was January so about 4 months ago. 
It's really funny time. 
>> It was a really fun time.
We went to the downtown by bus and arrive as soon as we went to the cafe with good mood. 
>> We went downtown by bus and as soon as we arrived, we went into a cafe in a good mood. 
We had a lot of talking about each other's story. 
>> We told a lot of our own stories.
We had a lot of story because it was meeting after a long time. 
>> We had a lot of stories to tell because it's been a while since we last met.
Dinner time was very quickly came. 
>> Dinner time came really quickly.
We went to the restaurant, it's like hookup calash of mood. 
>> We went to a restaurant.
We ate pasta and chicken and soju, beer and makgeolii. 
>> We ate pasta and chicken and drank soju, beer and makgeolli. 
It was very heavy for ours. 
>> Our stomachs felt really heavy.
We were very full but fun. 
>> We were very full but we had a lot of fun.
We get more excited and we got a cotton candy from strangers. 
>> We got more excited when we got cotton candy from strangers. 
We doesn't know the reason of that. 
>> We didn't know the reason for that.
Finally, we went to the photo booth and took the pictures. 
>> Finally, we went to a photo booth and took some pictures. 
Then, we goodbye.
>> Then, we said goodbye.
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