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What are the pros and cons of eating out?

작성자: 김*소
2022-05-30 385

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First I think eating out is some special event with family or friends so it is good for becoming familiar with someone. Meeting someone with delicious meal is perfect. Actually because I'm a Junior I really eat out very much on weekdays with classmates or friends from school guitar club. It is necessary one for making real friends. I like it! (I am a member of classic guitar club at university school!) And we can experience various food that I cannot eat at home. Especially as my major, it is good for my future. Oh, but in korea, we can eat many kinds of food at home using delivary service that have improved because of Covid19. I think it is not good for environment.. so they have to become a good one for environment. And I have to spend my money very much if I go eating out. That is negative thing that I think about eating out.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용


Hi Sally, 
Treating yourself to a meal out removes the effort of trying to prepare and cook unfamiliar food yourself at home. Instead, you can have an authentic tasting experience and see how it is supposed to look and taste before you feel like giving it a go yourself! The advantage of eating out ensures you always have an extensive range of foods to choose from. Not only does this help solve your food boredom, but it also helps you delve into a lot of cultures through food. And eating out also has its drawbacks, the most important and obvious of which is the price of restaurant dishes, which will cost several times more than homemade food. The amount of food received will be smaller as well.
“Eating well to live well” ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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First I think eating out is some special event with family or friends so it is good for becoming familiar with someone. 
>> First, I eat out with my family and friends on some special occasions or occasionally because it's a good way to become familiar with each other. 
Meeting someone with delicious meal is perfect. 
>> Meeting someone with a delectable meal is perfect. 
Actually because I'm a Junior I really eat out very much on weekdays with classmates or friends from school guitar club.
>> Actually, because I'm a Junior University student I really eat out most of the time on weekdays with my classmates or friends from the school guitar club.
 It is necessary one for making real friends. 
>>  It is very necessary to eat out for making and meet real friends.
I like it! (I am a member of classic guitar club at university school!)
>>  I like it! and I'm a member of the classic guitar club at university school!
 And we can experience various food that I cannot eat at home. 
>> And we can experience and taste various kinds of food that I cannot eat at home. 
Especially as my major, it is good for my future. 
>> Especially as for my major, it is good for my future. 
Oh, but in korea, we can eat many kinds of food at home using delivary service that have improved because of Covid19. 
>> Oh, but in South Korea, we can eat and enjoy various kinds of food at home using a delivery service app that has improved because of Covid19. 
I think it is not good for environment.. so they have to become a good one for environment.
>> I think it is not good for the environment so they have to think of a good one for the environment.
 And I have to spend my money very much if I go eating out. 
>>  And eating out is expensive so I have to spend my money a lot if I go eat out all the time. 
That is negative thing that I think about eating out.
>> That is the negative thing or disadvantage that I think about eating out.
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First I think eating out is some special event with family or friends so it is good for becoming familiar with someone. Meeting someone with delicious meal is perfect. Actually because I'm a Junior I really eat out very much on weekdays with classmates or friends from school guitar club. It is necessary one for making real friends. I like it! (I am a member of classic guitar club at university school!) And we can experience various food that I cannot eat at home. Especially as my major, it is good for my future. Oh, but in korea, we can eat many kinds of food at home using delivary service that have improved because of Covid19. I think it is not good for environment.. so they have to become a good one for environment. And I have to spend my money very much if I go eating out. That is negative thing that I think about eating out.
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