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Do you usually plan your weekends?

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Yes. I usally plan my weekends.
I can't spend meaning my weekends because If I don't have plan.
Also I can prevent promises with someone or work to do at the same time.

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Hi there Julia!
You've got lots of free time in your hands and you were able to make your homework Keep it up and thank you for spending time writing your thoughts.
Happy Wednesday!
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Yes. I usually plan my weekends.
>>>  CORRECT!
I can't spend meaning my weekends because If I don't have plan.
>>>  I can't spend a meaningful weekend If I don't have a plan.
Also, I can prevent promises with someone or work to do at the same time.
>>>CORRECT!
or >>> Also, it can avoid conflicting schedules if we plan our weekend activities.
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