¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

What was the most memorable food or activity that you have tried while traveling? / What was your be

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¼Ò
2022-06-03 502

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®





When I went to Hongkong, I ate a egg tart. Egg tart is very famous food in Hongkong so I really wanted to eat that. I felt that the tart is crispy and the egg sauce is sweet and mild appropriately, so I really surprised. Today I remembered my another traveling in Boracay! On the beach in Boracay, a woman braided my hair like that photos! It was unusual experience. When I went to HongKong, I was young girl so I think travel in Boracay was my best travel. Because there are beautiful scenery, beautiful beach, delicious food like duck meat, nice hotel and so on! I think best travel is that when I memory a travel I can think the travel is very nice and I want to go one more time.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hi Sally,
I like your picture. You're so pretty and cute. Your braided hair is nice and you look pretty. Keep smiling..:)
About traveling.. One of the most important benefits of traveling is the opportunity to build friendships and connections with people from all around the world. And exposing yourself to the unexpected when traveling often allows you to broaden your mind so much further. This includes culture, religion, food, and people. Having an open mind and being willing to dive head first into an experience will make travel experiences exceptional. " Enjoy traveling and Keep safe."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
When I went to Hongkong, I ate a egg tart. Egg tart is very famous food in Hongkong so I really wanted to eat that. 
>> When I went to Hongkong, I ate an egg tart. The egg tart is a very famous food in Hongkong so I really wanted to try and eat that. 
I felt that the tart is crispy and the egg sauce is sweet and mild appropriately, so I really surprised. 
>> I felt that the tart is crispy and the egg sauce is sweet and appropriately mild so I was really surprised. 
Today I remembered my another traveling in Boracay! On the beach in Boracay, a woman braided my hair like that photos! It was unusual experience. 
>> Today, I remembered another travel experience to Boracay! On the beach in Boracay, a woman braided my hair like that photo! It was an unusual experience for me. 
When I went to HongKong, I was young girl so I think travel in Boracay was my best travel.
>> When I went to Hong Kong, I was still a young girl at that time so I think traveling to Boracay was my best travel.
 Because there are beautiful scenery, beautiful beach, delicious food like duck meat, nice hotel and so on! 
>> Boracay is my best travel experience because there is beautiful scenery, a beautiful beach, delicious food like duck meat, a nice hotel and so on! 
I think best travel is that when I memory a travel I can think the travel is very nice and I want to go one more time.
>I think the best travel last forever and will remain in your memory because it was nice and enjoyable as well as you want to go back to that place again and again
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
When I went to Hongkong, I ate a egg tart. Egg tart is very famous food in Hongkong so I really wanted to eat that. I felt that the tart is crispy and the egg sauce is sweet and mild appropriately, so I really surprised. Today I remembered my another traveling in Boracay! On the beach in Boracay, a woman braided my hair like that photos! It was unusual experience. When I went to HongKong, I was young girl so I think travel in Boracay was my best travel. Because there are beautiful scenery, beautiful beach, delicious food like duck meat, nice hotel and so on! I think best travel is that when I memory a travel I can think the travel is very nice and I want to go one more time.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
118874 homework ÃÖ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 488
118873 home work ÃÖ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 477
118872 Banning Serving Fast Food To Students ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 608
118871 Homework Àå*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 511
118870 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 1
118869 Which State in America do you really like to live in, and why? ¼­*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 1
118868 If you can have a part-time job, what do you like it to be? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 2
118867 my busiest day of week ±è*¼º ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 416
118866 Should poor people be punished for stealing if they are stealing... ½Å*¼· ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 555
118865 What is your all-time favorite movie? Why? ±è*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-05-10 582
118864 Writing Task(May 9th, 2022) ³²*½Â ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 588
118863 5/9 HOMEWORK [{(IT\'S)ZOE\'S}ONE] ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 414
118862 Information À±*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 459
118861 Homework ±Ç*¹Ì ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 0
118860 homework ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 629
118859 Choice of the fast food ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 644
118858 What is the most famous female sport in your country? Why? ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 717
118857 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 2
118856 Allowance ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 1
118855 What is the most positive change you have experienced in your... ¹é*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-09 541

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04