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When i was middle school student, i reading the book that name is 'too loud solitude'.
first i look this book name, i wondering what wirter's intension.
but when i close the book, i understand the meaning.

the main character 'hanta' is so many thinking in his head more than other people and so loudly in his head.
in contrast quite his mouth.

like wise, even though i have so many things that i must completely finish university homework and part-time job, what more serious is my endless thoughts. this is the reason why i am busy.

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Hi, Jumi.

Thank you so much for sending me your homework. Wow! You're seriously thinking a lot of things at a young age. I hope all that is running in your head are good thoughts and your plans to become a better and successful person.

I hope you can share a lot of things in class later. See you!
~Teacher ERIN


When i was middle school student, i reading the book that name is 'too loud solitude'.

>>When I was a middle school student, I was reading the book entitled "Too loud solitude".


first i look this book name, i wondering what wirter's intension.

>>I'm wondering what's the writer's intention for writing this book.


but when i close the book, i understand the meaning.

>>But after reading the book, I finally understand what is it all about.


the main character 'hanta' is so many thinking in his head more than other people and so loudly in his head. in contrast quite his mouth.

>>The main character is Hanta. He's always thinking a lot of things than the other people, and sometimes the thoughts in his head are keeping him uncomfortable.


like wise, even though i have so many things that i must completely finish university homework and part-time job, what more serious is my endless thoughts. this is the reason why i am busy.

>>I feel the same way as Hanta. I am always busy with my responsibilities as a student and a part-timer. But even if I always keep myself busy, the thoughts in my head are still running endlessly.

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