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The strangest festival I've ever heard of is the Boryeong Mud Festival. It is a festival where everyone soaks their bodies in mud because it improves the skin, but there is no evidence that the skin improves. This Boryeong Mud Festival is held in the city of Boryeong in South Korea.

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Hello, Sheila! ^^
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The strangest festival I've ever heard of is the Boryeong Mud Festival. 
>>> CORRECT!

It is a festival where everyone soaks their bodies in mud because it improves the skin, but there is no evidence that the skin improves. 
>>> It is a festival where everyone soaks their bodies in the mud because it improves the skin, but it's not proven that it really does.

This Boryeong Mud Festival is held in the city of Boryeong in South Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
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