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What do you think is the best job in the world?

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I think it's the CEO and president of company. They don't have to worry about money. And whatever they can buy to want. Also, there is a culture called hereditary succession in South Korea, so there are many cases where the chairman's son is the chairman.

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Hi Elic!  

Yes, that's a great job but it also comes with great responsibilities. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I think it's the CEO and president of company. 
>> I think being a CEO or a president of a company is the best job in the world. 

They don't have to worry about money. 
>> CORRECT

And whatever they can buy to want. 
>> They can buy whatever they want as  well. 

Also, there is a culture called hereditary succession in South Korea, so there are many cases where the chairman's son is the chairman.
>> CORRECT
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