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I think homework contributes to success too. Because first, homework help understand. When students do their homework, they can remind what they are learn. So homework gives many helps to remind and understand the class. Second, students can know which points are they wrong. When they did homework, then students get feedback from teacher. And students can know which thing they wrong, and they can develop their skill. Therefore, I think homework contributes to success.

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Hi Bella!
Please take note of common expressions.
These are always a challenge for students.
However, in time, I know you will get them perfectly.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think homework contributes to success too. 
>> I think homework contributes to success, too. 
Because first, homework help understand. 
>> The first reason is that homework can help students understand.
When students do their homework, they can remind what they are learn. 
>> When students do their homework, they can be reminded of what they have learned.
So homework gives many helps to remind and understand the class. 
>> So homework is a big help for students to remember and understand their lessons.
Second, students can know which points are they wrong. 
>> Second, students can know which points they got wrong.
When they did homework, then students get feedback from teacher. 
>> When they do their homework, the students get feedback from the teacher. 
And students can know which thing they wrong, and they can develop their skill. 
>> Students can know which things they got wrong and they can develop their skills.  
Therefore, I think homework contributes to success.
>> Correct
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