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Do you know about any anti-pollution programs in your community?

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The representative anti-pollution program would be the carbon point system. Municipal governments established this program to decrease the carbon emitted from houses and commercial districts. The participants would be granted incentives by reducing the usage of electricity, water utilities, and gas, which is given as a gift card twice per year. It is calculated by averaging monthly emissions over of past two years and comparing them to the current emission level. There are two disadvantages of such a program. First, the benefit of registering as an apartment complex outweighs that for individuals. However, getting everyone's consent and monitoring the performance from a minimum of 100 households per apartment is difficult. Then, the reduction level for electricity, water, and gas are calculated, respectively. Since the incentive of reducing the electricity level is higher than the ones for gas and water, the participants could overlook some components of the same importance.

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The representative anti-pollution program would be the carbon point system. 
>>>  correct  
Municipal governments established this program to decrease the carbon emitted from houses and commercial districts. 
>>> OR: Municipal governments established this program to decrease the carbon emission of houses and commercial districts.     
The participants would be granted incentives by reducing the usage of electricity, water utilities, and gas, which is given as a gift card twice per year. 
>>>  correct  
It is calculated by averaging monthly emissions over of past two years and comparing them to the current emission level. 
>>>  correct  
There are two disadvantages of such a program. 
>>>  correct    
First, the benefit of registering as an apartment complex outweighs that for individuals. 
>>>  correct    
However, getting everyone's consent and monitoring the performance from a minimum of 100 households per apartment is difficult. 
>>>  correct    
Then, the reduction level for electricity, water, and gas are calculated, respectively. 
>>>   correct   
Since the incentive of reducing the electricity level is higher than the ones for gas and water, the participants could overlook some components of the same importance.
>>>  correct    

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