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What is the best movie you have ever seen? Watching movie has been a long time since COVID-19 spread all of the world. I can't remember what I watch moves recently. But, I think the Parasite is best move. The Parasite shows the gap of rich and poor people. It handles the chacter of human like greedy, selfshness. The director of Parasite has got a lot of award. If you didn't watch that movie. I recommend to watch the movie.
-We usually have the same routine in week. Except the special event like over time working and planns.
-We made the name as Eve, because she is adopted to us on Chrismas Eve. So, We call her Eve.
-Even if the weather is not yet summer, It's hot. We are turning on air conditioner.
-I have been doing Pilates for one year and half. He started the Pilates in 3 month ago. I recommended the Pilates to my husband. At first, my husband feels hard to make a right posture. But It's going to easy. I think the Pilates is good to make a good posture like standing and sitting.

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Hi, Young!

Thank you for sharing about that. That movie was indeed a very popular one. It was praised for it's amazing story. 

Have a good night and talk to you tomorrow!

~T. Roanne ^_^
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Watching movie has been a long time since COVID-19 spread all of the world. 
>> Correct!
I can't remember what I watch moves recently. 
>> Correct! Or I can't remember what movies I have watched recently.
But, I think the Parasite is best move. 
>> Correct!
The Parasite shows the gap of rich and poor people. 
>> Correct!
It handles the chacter of human like greedy, selfshness. 
>> It handles or shows the character of humans like being greedy or selfishness.
The director of Parasite has got a lot of award. 
>> The director of the movie Parasite has received a lot of awards.
If you didn't watch that movie. 
>> Correct!
I recommend to watch the movie.
>> Correct! Or i recommend you to watch the movie.


-We usually have the same routine in week.
>> We usually have the same routine every week.
 Except the special event like over time working and planns.
>> Except for some special events like over time working and some other plans.
-We made the name as Eve, because she is adopted to us on Chrismas Eve. So, We call her Eve.
>> We made the name as Eve because she was adopted and given to us on Christmas Eve that's why we call her Eve.
-Even if the weather is not yet summer, It's hot.
>> Correct!
We are turning on air conditioner.
>> We are turning on the air conditioner.
-I have been doing Pilates for one year and half. 
>> I have been doing Pilates for one year and a half.
He started the Pilates in 3 month ago. 
>> He started the Pilates 3 months ago.
I recommended the Pilates to my husband. 
>> Correct!
At first, my husband feels hard to make a right posture. 
>> Correct!
But It's going to easy. I think the Pilates is good to make a good posture like standing and sitting.
>> Correct!
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