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What is the best way to learn a language? / What difficulties did you encounter when learning Englis

작성자: 김*소
2022-06-15 806

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The best way to learn a language I think is talking with foreigners. Every infants learn their native language from their parents' conversation. They listen their parents' sounds once and their brains study language. So once we listen other language so much and study how we say. For this studying, we have to talk or live with foreigners. But its difficulties are that experiences to talk with foreiners are rare and that having an other language class is quite expensive. Also if we get older, we are hard to learn other language because their brain are more familiar their native language than young people.

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Hi Sally,
The most effective way of learning a language is through context. When you read or listen to something, your brain doesn't take each word at face value. Instead, it's taking statistics about which words appear together often so that it can anticipate what's coming next and process speech faster. And communicating with foreign people will really help you improve your English skills.
English Grammar is complex, making it difficult to remember, master and use logically. Ensuring you use the correct grammar can be tricky, especially when you are in conversation with someone and they are speaking at an alarmingly fast pace. "Keep improving your English skills." Teacher QUENNY..

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The best way to learn a language I think is talking with foreigners.
>> I think the best way to learn the language is to communicate with foreigners. 
 Every infants learn their native language from their parents' conversation. 
>>  Every infant learns their native language from their parents' conversation. 
They listen their parents' sounds once and their brains study language. 
>> They listen to their parents' sounds and their brains study the language. 
So once we listen other language so much and study how we say. 
>> So once we must listen carefully to another language and study how to speak the language. 
For this studying, we have to talk or live with foreigners. But its difficulties are that experiences to talk with foreiners are rare and that having an other language class is quite expensive.
>> For this studying, we have to talk to or live with foreigners. But the difficulties are the experience to talk with foreigners are rare and that having another language class is quite expensive.
 Also if we get older, we are hard to learn other language because their brain are more familiar their native language than young people.
>>  Also as we get older, we are hard to learn other languages because the brain is more familiar with the native language than young people and older people is having difficulty absorbing and memorizing what they are learning. 
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The best way to learn a language I think is talking with foreigners. Every infants learn their native language from their parents' conversation. They listen their parents' sounds once and their brains study language. So once we listen other language so much and study how we say. For this studying, we have to talk or live with foreigners. But its difficulties are that experiences to talk with foreiners are rare and that having an other language class is quite expensive. Also if we get older, we are hard to learn other language because their brain are more familiar their native language than young people.
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