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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The good thing about books is that they allow you to use your imagination when you read them and feel good when you turn the pages. 
>>> CORRECT!

The disadvantage is that there are many texts, so it is difficult to read for people with poor concentration, and once damaged, it is difficult to recover. 
>>> CORRECT!

The advantage of a movie is that you can immerse yourself in it because it is a video shot. 
>>> CORRECT!

The downside of the movie is that it has a long story in a short amount of time, which can make you feel bored.
>>> CORRECT!
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