¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

The advantage and necessity of self-isolation is that it can minimize the spread of infectious disea

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*ÁØ
2022-06-15 549

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

The advantage and necessity of self-isolation is that it can minimize the spread of infectious diseases. The disadvantage is that the economic loss of the quarantined person occurs and the social and economic system shrinks.

As with Corona, the isolation of a large number of people has a great impact on the social system. In order for the social isolation system to operate efficiently and effectively, social consensus and active participation of the people are essential.

I think the Republic of Korea has dealt with Corona well over the past two years. It was possible because the government did well and many people participated well.

I have been quarantined twice. Fortunately, there were no specific symptoms. So, during quarantine, I had a good time studying and exercising. Anyway, I think it's fortunate that Korea is now almost back to normal.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good evening Eliot! Thank you for sharing your journey during the isolation period/quarantine. Keep safe and have a good night ahead! See you soon Eliot!:)


~T. Annie



The advantage and necessity of self-isolation is that it can minimize the spread of infectious diseases.

>>Correct!

The disadvantage is that the economic loss of the quarantined person occurs and the social and economic system shrinks.

>>Correct!

As with Corona, the isolation of a large number of people has a great impact on the social system.>>

>>Correct!

In order for the social isolation system to operate efficiently and effectively, social consensus and active participation of the people are essential.

>>In order for the social isolation system to operate efficiently and effectively, social consensus and the active participation of the people are essential.

I think the Republic of Korea has dealt with Corona well over the past two years.

>>Correct!

 It was possible because the government did well and many people participated well.

>>Correct!

I have been quarantined twice.

>>Correct!

Fortunately, there were no specific symptoms.

>>Correct!

So, during quarantine, I had a good time studying and exercising.

>>Correct!

Anyway, I think it's fortunate that Korea is now almost back to normal.

>>Correct!

¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
118211 About canned, frozen and processed food. ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 511
118210 Busan ÃÖ*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 446
118209 What items should people bring with them on a camping trip? And... ¼º*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 480
118208 What is the best activity to do while camping? Why? ¼º*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 312
118207 Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 3
118206 Homework ±è*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 305
118205 Homework ÇÔ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 1
118204 exportation ±Ç*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 338
118203 2022.4.12 Àü* ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 558
118202 What do you understand about this famous quote: ¡°An apple a day... ¼­*¿µ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 4
118201 Would you like more money or more vacation? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-04-13 6
118200 HOMEWORK ¹è*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 467
118199 4/12 homework ( •̀ ¥ø •́ )y ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 412
118198 The Post Everything on Social Media ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 528
118197 Children crying ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 3
118196 party ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 414
118195 The strangest food ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 2
118194 Was there a situation when you felt tongue-tied? ¿À*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 529
118193 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 420
118192 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-04-12 1

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04