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What tradition or custom from your country would you like to share or inform foreigners? Why?

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These days, various cultures are mixed. So I am not sure what is my own tradition or custom, but I hope to share the thing that I like most. It is Hanbok, the traditional clothes. We don't wear it commonly, but it is a symbol of my country. Especially I love the fusion style than the old style. Please check the attached photos. It has own line and attraction. I think it is like an angel and mysterious clothes. Those are practical and pretty. It has a endless possibility to upgrade the design. However, it is so expensive, that's why I don't have any thing. But I will try to wear it!!

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Hi Arissa,

Thank you for sharing your answer. I find hanbok really pretty but I was surprised to know that there are fusion styles. Thank you for sharing the lovely pictures. They look so nice! I think a lot of people, especially the youth, will find it more interesting to wear. Oh! I hope I'll get a chance to wear one too. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


These days, various cultures are mixed. So I am not sure what is my own tradition or custom, but I hope to share the thing that I like most. It is Hanbok, the traditional clothes. We don't wear it commonly, but it is a symbol of my country. I especially love the fusion style more than the old style. Please check the attached photos. It has its own line and attraction. I think it is like an angel and mysterious clothe. Those are practical and pretty. It has an endless possibility to upgrade the design. However, it is so expensive, that's why I don't have anything. But I will try to wear it!!

>> These days, various cultures are mixed. So I am not sure what is my own tradition or custom, but I hope to share the thing that I like most. It is Hanbok, the traditional clothes. We don't wear it commonly, but it is a symbol of my country. I especially love the fusion style more than the old style. Please check the attached photos. It has its own line and attraction. I think it is like an angel and mysterious clothe. Those are practical and pretty. It has an endless possibility to upgrade the design. However, it is so expensive, that's why I don't have anything. But I will try to wear it!!

>> Or: These days, various cultures are mixed. So I am not sure what is my tradition or custom, but I hope to share the thing that I like most. It is Hanbok, one of our traditional clothes. We don't usually wear it, but it symbolizes my country. I especially love the fusion style more than the old style. Please check the attached photos. It has its line and attraction. I think it is like an angel and mysterious clothing. It is practical and pretty. There's an endless possibility to upgrade the design. However, it is so expensive, that's why I don't have anything. But I will try to wear it!!
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