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The best movie for me is minions. When I was a elementary school student, I saw that movie first time. After I saw this movie, minions became my best movie. The reason why I like minions movie is I like minion’s charm. I think minion’s best charm points are their dumb actions and their song. Minions don’t use language, they just use reaction and talk together. Minions are generally dumb, but some minions are specially dumb. That minions make situations more funny. Also, I like minion’s song. There is some scene minions sing a song and fight with guard. That song is so addictive. The lyric is repeated. Therefore, my best movie is minions because of minion’s dumb actions and their song. Above all, minions are cute.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Bella!
You just have a gift that no one lese has.
I hope you can cultivate and grow more.
I believe in you so much.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The best movie for me is minions. 
>> The best movie for me is "Minions."
When I was a elementary school student, I saw that movie first time. 
>> When I was an elementary school student, I saw that movie for the first time. 
After I saw this movie, minions became my best movie. 
>> After I saw this movie, "Minions" became my favorite movie. 
The reason why I like minions movie is I like minion’s charm.
>> The reason why I like the "Minions" movie is I like the characters' charm. 
I think minion’s best charm points are their dumb actions and their song. 
>> I think the minions' most charming points are their dumb actions and their song. 
Minions don’t use language, they just use reaction and talk together. 
>> They don’t use language because they just use expressions while talking to each other. 
Minions are generally dumb, but some minions are specially dumb. 
>> Correct
That minions make situations more funny. 
>> Correct
Also, I like minion’s song. 
>> Also, I like the minions' song. 
There is some scene minions sing a song and fight with guard. 
>> There is a scene where the minions were singing a song and fighting with a guard. 
That song is so addictive. 
>> That song was so addictive. 
The lyric is repeated. 
>> The lyrics were repetitive. 
Therefore, my best movie is minions because of minion’s dumb actions and their song. 
>> Therefore, the best movie for me is "Minions" because of their dumb actions and their song. 
Above all, minions are cute.
>> Correct
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