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Umm first of all I live in suji gu. It is located in yongin city where the Everland is located. But you know everland is located in the countryside like mountain and farm something. but suji-gu is located in city. You know I love city than countryside. because city have not only very various public transport but also downtown. So I can play many things and I can go everywhere I want. But surprisingly I don¡¯t like noisy place because it makes me confuse. for example like seoul or busan. but suji gu is not really noisy but rather quiet. That why I love my city. Its quiet and convenient.
And my home.. umm interesting.. obviously my home is located in near by downtown area so I can get to the subway and downtown quickly. And also I live in quite big house than my friend¡¯s. Honestly big house sometimes makes me hard to clean up but I can invite many friends in my house. and i can furnish more furniture in my room. that why i love my house.

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Hello Robin!
You can answer the questions here just like you are answering in speaking.  But you should know the correct way in writing English in case you might have writing activities such as emails at work in the future.  It is for your additional skill.  Well, for you to improve your speaking skills, take note of the correct sentences. ^^


~T. Maine


Umm first of all I live in suji gu. 
>>First of all, I livein Suji Gu.
It is located in yongin city where the Everland is located. 
>>It is located in Yongin City where Everland is found. 
But you know everland is located in the countryside like mountain and farm something. 
>>But you know, Everland is located in the countryside where mountains and farms are seen. 
but suji-gu is located in city. 
>>While Suji Gu is located in the city. 
You know I love city than countryside. because city have not only very various public transport but also downtown. 
>>You know, I prefer the city to the countryside because the city has various public transportation and it is close to many shops. 
So I can play many things and I can go everywhere I want. 
>>So I can do many things and go everywhere I want to go. 
But surprisingly I don¡¯t like noisy place because it makes me confuse. for example like seoul or busan. 
>>Surprisingly, I don't like noisy places such as Seoul or Busan because they make me feel confused.
but suji gu is not really noisy but rather quiet. 
>>Whereas Suji Gu is quiet, unlike the two cities. 
That why I love my city.
>>That's why I love my city.  
 Its quiet and convenient.
>>It is really calm and convenient to stay there. 
And my home.. umm interesting.. obviously my home is located in near by downtown area so I can get to the subway and downtown quickly. 
>>Talking about my home, it is obviously located near downtown so I can get to the subway stations and downtown easily. 
And also I live in quite big house than my friend¡¯s. 
>> Also, I live in a bigger house than my friend's.
Honestly big house sometimes makes me hard to clean up but I can invite many friends in my house. 
>>Honestly, a huge house sometimes gives me a hard time cleaning it up, but I can invite many friends there. 
and i can furnish more furniture in my room. 
>> I can also put more furniture in my room. 
that why i love my house.
>>That's why I love my house. 

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