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HOMEWORK:
What kind of lie can you not forgive? Answer in a few sentences.

When it comes to having a relationship, I can't forgive cheating. It is the biggest lie. I can't forgive lies that hurt a relationship and mind.

Thank you so much today. It was huge meaningful to me.

Have a great evening!

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Good evening, Hae Ju!

You did great in practicing your introduction and executing your lesson plan today. It was my pleasure giving you some hand with that. For more, do not hesitate to ask help, I am just right here. ^^

Anyway, cheating in a relationship is the worst deceit. It is so disrespectful and it is the opposite of love. If we love someone, there should never be any other person getting in the way. Otherwise, it is just better to let go. Of course, when you are married, this needs to be considered very well especially when there are children involved. Nonetheless, cheating is so selfish and unaccepted.

Well, thank you for writing me a homework. Stay focused on your work and I wish you well in all of your preparations. Good luck!

See you!

-T. Donna =)

When it comes to having a relationship, I can't forgive cheating. 
>> Correct!

It is the biggest lie. 
>> Correct!

I can't forgive lies that hurt a relationship and mind.
>> Correct!
Or: I can't forgive lies that hurt a relationship and the mind.

Thank you so much today. 
>> Correct!

It was huge meaningful to me.
>> It was so meaningful to me.

Have a great evening!
>> Correct!
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