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Have you ever been caught in bad weather? If so, what did you do?

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Have you ever been caught in bad weather? If so, what did you do?
Yes, I have been that experience. Last summary, me and my husband wanted to go to the Ulleung island. But, the wave of the sea was quite high. So, the ship couldn't ship. I was so disappointed. But, we spent the time with visiting the attraction of the Seoul. Actually, the wave is usually high in September. I think I picked the bad date. This year, I will visit the Ulleung island in August.
-After I ate, I feel like I became fat? ( or I become fat?) In Korea, we usually have at least 3 side dish. The Kimchi is always included in side dish. I've never made the Kimchi. (or I have no experience making the Kimchi. I have eaten the Indian food. But, I haven't eaten the Pilipin food. To peel the mango is hard. I don't have a skill to peel. The mango has a seed of inside mango. The seed makes it hard.
-I have not played the tennis. I want to get sweat. The table tennis doesn't make a lot of sweat.

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Hi, Young! 

Thank you for sharing! 
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Yes, I have been that experience. 
>> Yes, I have been in that experience. 
Last summary, me and my husband wanted to go to the Ulleung island. 
>> Last Summer, me and my husband wanted to go to the Ulleung island. 
But, the wave of the sea was quite high. 
>> Correct! 
So, the ship couldn't ship. 
>> So, the ship couldn't sail.
I was so disappointed. 
>> Correct! 
But, we spent the time with visiting the attraction of the Seoul. 
>> But, we spent the time by visiting the attraction of the Seoul. 
Actually, the wave is usually high in September. 
>> Correct! 
I think I picked the bad date. 
>> Correct! 
This year, I will visit the Ulleung island in August.
>> Correct! 

-After I ate, I feel like I became fat? ( or I become fat?) 
>> I became fat. (because we are talking about a past event)
In Korea, we usually have at least 3 side dish. 
>> In Korea, we usually have at least 3 side dishes. 
The Kimchi is always included in side dish. 
>> The Kimchi is always included in side dishes. 
I've never made the Kimchi. (or I have no experience making the Kimchi. 
>> BOTH ARE CORRECT!
I have eaten the Indian food. But, I haven't eaten the Pilipin food. 
>> I have eaten the Indian food. But, I haven't eaten the Filipino food.
To peel the mango is hard. 
>> Correct! 
I don't have a skill to peel. 
>> Correct! OR I don't have a skill in peeling.
The mango has a seed of inside mango. The seed makes it hard.
>> The mango has a seed  inside of it. The seed makes it hard.
-I have not played the tennis. I want to get sweat. 
>> Correct! 
The table tennis doesn't make a lot of sweat.
>> Correct! 
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