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What do you do to set a good example to others on how to become good citizens?

작성자: 김*연
2022-06-25 782

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The good citizens have to keep the morality and rationality. Citizen is the symbol of democracy. So we have to think about others. For example, there is a town and there is a dispute to determine the place for a waste disposal site. Good citizens will suggest the proper place for the town, but bad citizens will not allow to set it in near their house. There is a NIMBY(not in my backyard ) syndrome. It is a bad citizens's attitude. However, the good citizens show PIMFY(please in my front yard) syndrome.
Acutally I'm undergoing this NIMBY thesedays. My neighbors don't want to set the waste disposal site in their Villa and they insisted like this, "If the waste disposal site is our area, your villa's people don't use it!" It was so upset! As a result, my villa's people decided to set it in our front yard. In this case, my area's people is good cixizen, isn't is?

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Hi Arissa,

I'm glad that I was able to read your answer. 
I agree with what you mentioned about being a good citizen. It's mostly on doing what is good not just for ourselves, but most especially to others and for the greater good. 
I think the people in your villa including you definitely are good citizens. You have decided to have it in your front yard to lessen the arguments and for a waste disposal area, that's hard but you still did. ^^
Let's always try our best to become good citizens. I just hope other people would start to think this way too. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina

The good citizens have to keep the morality and rationality. Citizen is the symbol of democracy. So we have to think about others. For example, there is a town and there is a dispute to determine the place for a waste disposal site. Good citizens will suggest the proper place for the town, but bad citizens will not allow to set it in near their house. There is a NIMBY(not in my backyard ) syndrome. It is a bad citizens's attitude. However, the good citizens show PIMFY(please in my front yard) syndrome.
Acutally I'm undergoing this NIMBY thesedays. My neighbors don't want to set the waste disposal site in their Villa and they insisted like this, "If the waste disposal site is our area, your villa's people don't use it!" It was so upset! As a result, my villa's people decided to set it in our front yard. In this case, my area's people is good cixizen, isn't is?


>> The good citizens have to keep the morality and rationality. A citizen is the symbol of democracy. So we have to think about others. For example, there is a town and there is a dispute to determine the place for a waste disposal site. Good citizens will suggest the proper place for the town, but bad citizens will not allow to set it in near their house. There is a NIMBY(not in my backyard ) syndrome. It is a bad citizens' attitude. However, the good citizens show PIMFY(please in my front yard) syndrome.
Actually, I'm undergoing this NIMBY these days. My neighbors don't want to set the waste disposal site in their Villa and they insisted like this, "If the waste disposal site is in our area, your villa's people should not use it!" It was so upsetting! As a result, my villa's people decided to set it in our front yard. In this case, my area's people are good citizens, right?
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