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I liked music class since I was young.
And I liked to listen to the piano.
So I liked music performance class the most in university.

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Good evening, Joy!


Thank you for submitting your homework right away!


It is nice to know that you like music already when you were young. It seems that you took interesting classes when you were a university student :)


I wish I was as talented as you ^^


I hope you have a great night. See you tomorrow!


~ Teacher Gela



I liked music class since I was young. 

>> I have been interested in music classes since I was young.


 And I liked to listen to the piano. 

>> CORRECT

OR>> And I liked listening to the piano.


So I liked music performance class the most in university.

>> So, I liked the music performance classes the most in the university.

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