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The Internet Is a Threat to Physical Book

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These days, we can easily discover those who have iPad and Samsung tablets, and so on. These electronic devices allow people to access the internet conveniently. It does not make the hasty generalization that all people who have tablets use these electronic devices for reading books. They have different purposes for having tablets. However, it is for sure that the internet can be a huge threat to physical books. When I was a high school sophomore student, my classmates started to use the iPad and tablets during the classes. Some teachers allowed students to use electronic devices to access online materials such as online textbooks and so on. It was a starting point to be alternated from the physical books to E-books. And now, I also have tablets to take classes at a university. I sometimes prefer physical books to e-books. However, when I have limited time to print out, I just downloaded online materials on my tablets within 5 minutes. It is for sure that the internet can be a threat.

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Hi, Helena!
Thank you for doing your homework. You really did great in answering and you were able to express your idea about this topic. Keep it up!
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These days, we can easily discover those who have iPad and Samsung tablets, and so on. 
>> CORRECT
These electronic devices allow people to access the internet conveniently. 
>> CORRECT
It does not make the hasty generalization that all people who have tablets use these electronic devices for reading books. 
>> Let's not make a hasty generalization that all people who have tablets use these electronic devices for reading books. 
They have different purposes for having tablets. 
>> CORRECT
However, it is for sure that the internet can be a huge threat to physical books. 
>> CORRECT
When I was a high school sophomore student, my classmates started to use the iPad and tablets during the classes.
>> When I was a high school sophomore student, my classmates started to use the iPad and tablets during classes.
Some teachers allowed students to use electronic devices to access online materials such as online textbooks and so on. 
>> CORRECT
It was a starting point to be alternated from the physical books to E-books. 
>> It was the transition point from the physical books to E-books. 
And now, I also have tablets to take classes at a university.
>> CORRECT
I sometimes prefer physical books to e-books. 
>> CORRECT
However, when I have limited time to print out, I just downloaded online materials on my tablets within 5 minutes. 
>>However, when I have limited time to print out materials, I just downloaded them online on my tablet within 5 minutes. 
It is for sure that the internet can be a threat.
>> CORRECT
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