¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Homework

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*¿ì
2022-06-29 956

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

Good morning again Donna!
I stayed up too late last night, so I don't have enough sleep.
I am so tired, but I am in the mood of delight and joy because I joined your English class in the morning.
My wife and I talked about Power English last night.
I told her the advantage of the class.
Thus she decided to join the class today.
I am so glad to hear that she enjoyed the first of the class with teacher Beth just before.
I wonder if you know her.
My wife actually tried to choose your class, but she couldn't do that because your class is already full.
Now, this is my homework.
I think the most Koreans are relatively healthy.
In my country many people know that balanced nutrition, regular exercise, keeping their body slim are important.
The richer, the healthier I think.
The most Korean have a good quality of life, and it's easy to obtain fresh vegetables, seasonal fruits, vitamins and somethings like that in Korea.
So I think Korea is a good country to live.
How about your country?

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Good afternoon, Dr. Kim!

I hope you are alert and awake as of this writing upon sleeping late last night with some discussions with your wife. It's great to hear about her first day and it is also very reassuring to know that you are satisfied with our teaching strategies and techniques. It's our pleasure to serve you! Regarding my class schedule, I hope to meet your wife in one way or another someday. My classes could get pretty busy sometimes. Teacher Beth and all of us always do our best to engage you in enjoyable and meaningful conversations.

Anyway, for the homework part, I realized that living in your country has a lot of advantages. There is more than enough opportunity for food, fitness, not to mention beauty in terms of  advanced medicine expecifically in your field of dermatology. In my country, the priviledged or the rich can access all of these conveniently. Meanwhile, a great number of Filipinos are still living in poverty and expereince malnutrition, diseases, and lack opportunities to better their lives. We have a long way to go to reach your level of independence in terms of financial security and nutrition.

Today, your writing was crystal clear with very limited room for suggestions to make. Carry on with your outstanding skills in writing!

See you again soon. Enjoy the rest of the day!

-T. Donna =)

Good morning again Donna!
>> Correct!

I stayed up too late last night, so I don't have enough sleep.
>> Correct!

I am so tired, but I am in the mood of delight and joy because I joined your English class in the morning.
>> Correct!

My wife and I talked about Power English last night.
>> Correct!

I told her the advantage of the class.
>> Correct!

Thus she decided to join the class today.
>> Correct!

I am so glad to hear that she enjoyed the first of the class with teacher Beth just before.
>> I am so glad to hear that she enjoyed her first class with teacher Beth.

I wonder if you know her.
>> Correct!

My wife actually tried to choose your class, but she couldn't do that because your class is already full.
>> Correct!

Now, this is my homework.
>> Correct!
 
I think the most Koreans are relatively healthy.
>> I think most Koreans are relatively healthy.

In my country many people know that balanced nutrition, regular exercise, keeping their body slim are important.
>> In my country many people know that balanced nutrition, regular exercise, and keeping their body slim are important.

The richer, the healthier I think.
>> Correct!

The most Korean have a good quality of life, and it's easy to obtain fresh vegetables, seasonal fruits, vitamins and somethings like that in Korea.
>> Most Koreans have a good quality of life, and it's easy to obtain fresh vegetables, seasonal fruits, vitamins and somethings like that in Korea.

So I think Korea is a good country to live.
>> Correct!

How about your country?
>> Correct!
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
119450 Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. ±è*ÀÎ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 0
119449 Homework ÀÌ*Èñ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 0
119448 Do you like business trips? ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 2
119447 My wish this summer ÀÌ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 478
119446 How can loneliness be bad for people¡¯s health? How can lonely... ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 402
119445 Right? ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 533
119444 What kind of diet have you tried? ±è*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 2
119443 Do you think vaccines are important and effective? Why or why... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 0
119442 What was the best suggestion you have ever received from someone? ÀÌ*°æ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 375
119441 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 538
119440 about buying things ±è*±Ô ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 0
119439 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 4
119438 Do you think everyone should have a holiday from school or work... ÅÂ*¼­ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 503
119437 homework ÀÌ*ÁÖ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 571
119436 How much time ¹Î*Á¤ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 3
119435 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 0
119434 homework Á¤*È£ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 0
119433 What is the meaning of \"give and take\"? what does this mean to... ¹é*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 518
119432 homework Á¤*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 928
119431 What festivals or celebrations does your country have during the... ¿©*Áø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-30 0

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04