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For me, English listening is the easiest thing for me. Apparently, it is hard to listen and understang in high level listening, but most of normal level listening is affordable for me. So whenever I take model IELTS test, it is the listening part that I can get most high score among 4 section, listening, speaking, writing, reading. Furthermore, I listen to the class in English. It makes me get used to listen English. But still I think I am not enough skillful in listening. Because nowadays I start to watch a british youtuber's live stream but it is not that easy to understand those slangs and high-speed talking. I truly want to be able to understand what he saying and those streamings' contents. As I getting old, it feels like that English is very much useful for my life not only for test grade. I will keep trying hard to study English for the day when I can totally understand his streaming and can fluently express my thinking orally and also in writing. It is such a big motivation.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hey, Sue. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts on the homework topic. I hope you find the corrections useful as you continue developing your English skills. Good luck! :) ~Teacher Jane c", 


For me, English listening is the easiest thing for me. 
OR >> For me, listening is the easiest skill in English to practice. 

Apparently, it is hard to listen and understang in high level listening, but most of normal level listening is affordable for me. 
>> Apparently, it is hard to listen and understand high-level listening but most normal level listening is convenient for me. 

So whenever I take model IELTS test, it is the listening part that I can get most high score among 4 section, listening, speaking, writing, reading. 
>> So whenever I take a mock IELTS test, it is the listening part that I can get the highest score among the 4 sections, listening, speaking, writing, and reading. 

Furthermore, I listen to the class in English. 
>> CORRECT =) 

It makes me get used to listen English. 
>> It helps me get used to listening to English. 

But still I think I am not enough skillful in listening. 
>> But still, I think I am not skillful enough in listening. 

Because nowadays I start to watch a british youtuber's live stream but it is not that easy to understand those slangs and high-speed talking. 
>> Because nowadays I have been watching a British Youtuber's live stream but it is not that easy to understand those slang and high-speed talking. 

I truly want to be able to understand what he saying and those streamings' contents. 
>> I truly want to be able to understand what he is saying and those streaming's contents. 

As I getting old, it feels like that English is very much useful for my life not only for test grade. 
>> As I am getting old, it feels like English is very much useful for my life not only for test scores. 

I will keep trying hard to study English for the day when I can totally understand his streaming and can fluently express my thinking orally and also in writing. 
>> I will keep trying hard to study English every day until I can totally understand his streaming and can fluently express my thoughts verbally and in writing. 

It is such a big motivation. 
>> CORRECT =) 
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